Mike Arcade Posted July 25, 2016 Share Posted July 25, 2016 Hello everyone and welcome to the discussion thread for Sonic: Age of Mobius, a series that shows a familiar yet unique Mobius then you are familiar with. This has been a long time in the making and I'm glad it's finally starting to get some footing, I hope you all enjoy the series as it comes out, for now though as of this posting please enjoy the teaser in the Story Thread giving you a taste of a certain event... Keep an eye out for future stories along with any other news and content in this Thread as well folks, Welcome to Mobius. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted August 21, 2016 Author Share Posted August 21, 2016 UPDATE & ANNOUNCEMENT Sonic Mobius, also known as Project: SM has gone through a little bit of an update, as in it's not called Sonic Mobius anymore. After much consideration and suggestion from fellow FSoM Staff the series has a new title, from now on it will be known as Sonic: Age of Mobius! Regarding this news, the series will soon get a story update with The Prologue, the Age of Mobius is about to begin everybody so stay tuned. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted August 22, 2016 Share Posted August 22, 2016 So is your first post no longer canon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted August 22, 2016 Author Share Posted August 22, 2016 The Teaser? Oh yeah no that's still canon, hence why it's still up there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 I guess that means I have to read it then . More homework. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 Homework done! Dance mates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted September 6, 2016 Share Posted September 6, 2016 Hey, just finished reading your first chapter. There were some common writing errors, you repeated a word in one of the paragraphs, so I didn't know if you wanted to fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted September 8, 2016 Author Share Posted September 8, 2016 The writing process for that chapter was originally under a different format before I translated it over to a more Novel Approach, thought I caught all the bugs too. XP So everyone, any thoughts on this so far, I know it's early to say this but I just want to see what everyone thinks about it, I'm really curious about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted September 8, 2016 Share Posted September 8, 2016 Did you want more of a critic or just an opinion? I enjoyed the story, but just because I enjoyed it doesn't help you with continuing the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedStranger Posted September 9, 2016 Share Posted September 9, 2016 Any bugs will need to be fixed - I run a tight ship on the group chat works. If I expect a progressive attempt at more and more artisan prose from members then I expect even better prose from one of my Second-in-Commands. Your own self-improvement will be scrutinized as an example to this community. Make sure it's spotless by the next update Mike. If you need help, I am here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted September 9, 2016 Author Share Posted September 9, 2016 Thank you Stranger, and I'm looking over the story posted to see where they are and fixing them. @Ishapar can you PM or give me a Skype message and tell me where those little errors are, I'm looking it over right now but just in case I missed anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted September 9, 2016 Share Posted September 9, 2016 Give me a chance to reread the chapter this weekend. I will then try to point out any errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 AOM Edit.rtf Edit Page.rtf Here are two wordpad documents. The one is your story with highlighting while the other is a list of errors I found in correspondance to the writing. I did not complete the entire story: if you want me to, I can work at completing the proofreading. I have noticed many mistakes, and if you want to talk, we can chat about it on skype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted September 18, 2016 Author Share Posted September 18, 2016 Just a small update, the next chapter and more will be coming along the way, with a bunch of edits for the first chapter being made throughout for now, expect much more of a bigger update though come October. Just wanted to put something out there. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted September 21, 2016 Share Posted September 21, 2016 Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted September 21, 2016 Author Share Posted September 21, 2016 It isn't that much of an update, no need for such praise. XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishapar Posted October 17, 2016 Share Posted October 17, 2016 So anything new on the update? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted October 17, 2016 Author Share Posted October 17, 2016 It'll be coming up around this Saturday, so no worries there, hopefully I can get a lot done with The Prologue as a lot of stuff is planned out, just keep watching buddy. ;p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Arcade Posted November 1, 2016 Author Share Posted November 1, 2016 We got ourselves an update...sort of. Age of Mobius: The Trial has officially begun, though not without some problems on my end, that being incompetence. On that note while The Trial is running due to these circumstances I'm sorry to say that for now the main story in of itself will be on a brief hiatus for now, that's not to say nothing is going to be done with it, after all The Trial in of itself will show you guys the world of AoM through that as well, so for those who aren't playing the RP I'd say check it out and join up, even if you're not at least read the RP as it goes along to see The Prologue from a different perspective. Before all of that though I've been thinking on having an hiatus due to personal reasons, as not much of the story has been released and work on it's been crawling a snail's pace. When the story starts updating again though expect it to be from a much more confident storyteller then the one posting this message as I speak.Till then folks keep an eye out for AoM and The Trial, have a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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