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Maybe the door doesn't lead to any great power?  If so, way to go, Dark E!

Not too bad of a story.  I enjoy that you placed some artwork in it as well.  My one comment is dealing with the artwork:  I believe you mentioned how James had some type of tattoos on his arms to help him control his magic.  The picture with him and Ed running doesn't show any. 

Is this your first attempt at the series, or did you write anything pertaining to the series before?

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